Hello! My name is Angelina Britney. I live in the big palace in the Mexico city. I realy like fashion and i love clothes because it's amazing to look awesome! I want to be a fashion designer. One day i was looking for a job i saw something new in the fashion. They looking for the fashion desinger. I deside that i greabt this job. Next day i was diside to go for a conversation for this job. That men said that i was very amazing for this job he sad thats my new job. Thet means that i have a new job. Next day i go in the job the staff prepared surprise for me. I was very happy and i was very good feel to the staff. Next day sefe cold me and he said that fashion desinger are not more succesful. I dicide to looking for a new job. When i was be in cofe i see a magazin one famous was looking fashion desinger. I deside that i tray for this conversation for this asome job. Next day i realy go for this conversation for this job. I knocked the door the door was opend she`s maid she told me that miss Kim Briney Fruits waiting in the office. When i was come in this office i present to my self. I told her that i was looking for a new job and i realy wont this job. I showed her my work experince. I had wrong paper with my experince. She see that we are sesters. I realy surprise that i have a sister o gosh. We are very happy because first of my life i now that i have a sister. My sister is very popilar. Together we are opend a fashion desinger i was very happy i cant belive for this miricle. This is my happy and that my story i hope so that you enjoy when you reading.
A good idea but you didn't follow the instructions very well. I'd like you to write more about your life and the things you do and don't do. There are mistakes too.
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